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:Spiron X: Chapter One
Chapter One: Battle In The Streets
"Fight... fight... fight... fight..."
The dark chanting of the kids around them increased, getting wild as electricity surged between two young teenage boys in front of Kajiro High School. One of them, a blonde boy was on the ground in a daze. The other boy had shoulder-length silver hair stood toweringly over him.
"Hey is that Alexander Anderson?" whispered a girl to a boy, "As in that freak Alex the one who lives in the those alleys with all those other weirdo street kids?"
The blonde scowled up at his younger rival. Alex had a good right punch; he had even managed to make his lip bleed. He hadn't been able to see it coming though he knew he should have expected something like this from Alex anyway.
"Yeah that's him, I'd recognize his silver hair and blue eyes anywhere," the boy replied back, "But what's he doing in here in front of our school? And how does he know Vincent?"
Both Vincent and Alex glared at each other, fists clenched so tight
Eclipse Project-chpt 1
The Hunter and the Creator
Jason pressed the handle forward as far as it would let him without breaking In attempt to simulate his jet diving through the sky as he tried several stunts without the chance of killing himself as his father had so often warned him of.
"Roger—this is Death-Bird, over," he grinned, speaking into the inner-com as he continued his playful simulation of flight through space. "I'm coming in for an emergency landing. Ship's fuel low from encounter with enemy jet—over."
He flipped several switches and pressed all the buttons necessary for such a landing. Jason had always wanted to be a pilot like his father. His older brother was a pilot now and his sister was a mechanic. He was the baby of the family and had never been taught how to fly. His mother had died when he was born, and she was a pilot, too. He felt neglected watching his family take off and leaving him standing there in the hanger alone. His sister would often stay with him; she'd tell him
A Guide to Writing DialogueWhat is dialogue, exactly? The definition from Merriam-Webster’s dictionary was several lines long, so I shall summarize it in a short sentence for the sake of the readers; it’s the writing that illustrates conversations between two or more characters in a story. We read and hear it all around us, but creating it in your own work can be a challenge. However, if you find dialogue an obstacle in your writing, then don’t push the panic button. In this tutorial, you’ll find by analyzing what dialogue can do and how to use it, you can turn your greatest fear into your greatest ally in your story.
What dialogue is
Like I’ve asserted before, dialogue is basically what the characters are saying to each other. It can be found in multiple mediums such as books, movies, comics, video games, etc. We even engage in dialogue daily without even thinking. When you talk to your best friend, a co-worker, or even your dog, you create dialogue. It’s exchang
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